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New Agent Part 8

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The next morning Macie got up and let Buster out, she check on Elizabeth who was still sleeping then went to make herself breakfast. She herd Buster at the door and opened it "Hello Buster." She said with a smile and let him in then walked back to the kitchen to finish her breakfast. After that she went to her room to change, she put on a white shirt with a sailor Jacket to match then put on a pare of dark jeans, Buster bark and shook his head no as if telling Macie that was a bad match, Macie looked at Buster and laughed "What are you a fashion stylist? Okay smart one show me what I need to change?" She asked crossing her arms and stepped away from the closet. Buster got off the bed and walked into the closet, He tugged at a the skirt that matched the top Macie had on "Dude, I work where I can't ware that! You got somethin else?" She asked with a smile, then laughed and face palmed "My god I'm asking my dog for style tips!!" She said as she flopped down on the bed then looked at Buster who had a teal shirt, with a pink belt on his head. Macie laughed and took it off his head "So this?" She asked, Buster barked his tail wagging "Okay, if you say so." She said then changed her shirts, she smiled. "Not Bad. Hey remained me to get you dog treats later." Macie said looking at him. Then the door bell rang, Buster quickly got up and ran to the living room jumping on the couch and looking at the door his tail wagging, Macie snickered, picked up Elizabeth and walked into the living room where she sat Elizabeth in the cradle then opened the door to see Emily, or Prentiss, at the door "Hey Macie Hotch told me to- Wow that's a horse on your couch!" She said with a laugh and walked in "When did you get him?" She asked walking over Buster and pat him "Yesterday, He's really good with Elizabeth, a guard dog, and get this, good with style! He picked this out really!" She said gesturing to her outfit "That is nice." Prentiss said with a smile then looked at Elizabeth that had woken up, Elizabeth looked at Prentiss and laughed "Daw." Prentiss said with a smile "Hey don't you have a baby sister for her yet?" Prentiss asked looking at Macie "Damn it! I forgot to look! Oh man what am I gonna do?" Macie asked as she put her finger tips on her lips to think "Hey, I have a friend that can Babysit for a you, and she's good with dogs too!" Prentiss said with a smile then pulled her phone out to call someone. Macie smiled "Thank you so much Prentiss." Macie said then walked over to the baby cradle and looked at Elizabeth "Ok sweetie, Mommy's gotta go to work, I know it's gonna suck but Busters gonna stay with you until I get back." Macie said then picked her up. After a while Lora, Pretiss' friend, got there Macie explained everything she needed to do for Elizabeth and Buster then, hugged Elizabeth, pat Buster on the head then left with Prentiss. Once at the office Macie and Prentiss walked into the bored room where they where right on time "Hey you two, wow nice outfit Macie." Penelope said with a smile Macie smiled back and shrugged, "Thank my dog, he picked it out." Macie said as she sat down in her chair "When'd you get a dog?" Derek asked looking at Macie "I'll explain it on the way to where we gotta go." She said then looked at the screen "Alright, so what do we got this time?" Macie asked sitting up a little "Alright, so there's been at least 3 kidnappings and there all women in there early 20's and once they where found they said that they where all raped." She then put up the images of the victims, the scary thing is they all looked like Macie. Bright green eyes, brown hair, and pale skin. Macies eyes got slightly wider as she sat up more "T-They look like me." Macie said "Do you think it's the same person?" Hotch asked looking at Macie "I don't think so, first I need to talk to the victims. On my own." Macie said looking at them "Alright. The files of the victims are already on your plan." Penelope said looking at them "Thanks, Penelope!" Macie said as she quickly got up and left, the others followed her. Once on the plan, Macie told the others about Buster then got to work on looking over the victims folders "23 year old Vicky Thomas, 26 year old Alice Glades, and 21 year old Nicole Taylor. They all said they where raped and beated by the same man, then all three of them where found on the side of an abandoned road stripped naked, with there hands and feet tided." Macie said as she sat the file down and leaned back 'This didn't happen to me. Maybe he's changing.' Macie thought to herself then scratched her head and sighed "This didn't happen to me." Macie said looking at the others "I was held at knife point, and I wasn't thrown to the side of the road after words, he knocked me out with something and I woke up in the hospital, Nurse said I was found by the doors of the hospital. They never found out who put me there cuz there cameras where broken." Macie said with a sigh "If this is the same man then he's improving." Hotch said looking at the files himself. Once they got to where the kidnappings where they where taken to the police station where the bored room was set up for them, Macie crossed her arms as she looked at the sketch they where able to get of the man "So, this is who the girls said raped them?" Macie asked looking at the sheriff "It's a sketch but yes, all three of them came up with the same look." He said putting his hands in is pocket "I just wanna catch this sick basterd before he gets any of the other girls, before he gets my daughter." he said looking at a picture he had of a girl on his desk. To Macies supersize she looked like her "Don't worry, we'll get him before he has the chance to even look at another girl." Macie said then looked at Hotch "I'll go and talk to the most resent victim." Macie said the headed to the doors, "Macie, wait. Reid's coming with you." Hotch said as Reid followed after Macie, she nodded looked at Reid then headed out the door, Hotch assigned JJ and Prentiss to go talk to the other girls. The girl Macie and Reid where going to see was Vicky Thomas the first victim. Once at Vicky's apartment building they knocked on her door and waited, they herd a woman's voice say "I'll be there in a minute." Macie and Reid looked at each other and shrugged. After about 3 minutes a woman with short, choppy like, blond hair opened the door "What do you want?" She asked looking at them "Vicky Thomas, We're with the FBI. I'm Macie and this is my partner Dr. Spencer Reid. We're here to talk to you about what happed a few days ago." Macie said looking at her. Vicky got an upset look, she glanced at Reid then at Macie "I'll talk with you but can your partner please wait out here. I'm sorry but I just can't trust men all that much." she said with sorrow in her voice. Macie nodded and looked at Reid and shrugged "Guess you get to play Cookie Jam. Try and beat my level, 39." Macie said with a chuckle then walked into the apartment, as she looked around she could see that it was cleaner than it should have been. "I know, it's so clean it hurts to look." Vicky said with a faint smile Macie looked at Vicky and smiles weakly "Vicky, are you able to help me find the mad that did this?" Macie asked, Vicky took a shaky breath and nodded. Macie smiled weakly as they both sat at the kitchen table and started to talk.
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OMFG I'M SO SORRY THIS IS SO LATE!!!! I was so darned of ideas then my sister and her baby and everything else and I had school crap to worry about I'm just so sorry it's so late!! but here ya go :3 I finally got this out and crap. Again I'm so sorry it's so late ;~;
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Thanks for updating!